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2003-03-26 East/Subsaharan Africa

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Posted by Steve 2003-03-26 12:22 pm|| || Front Page|| [11133 views since 2007-05-07] Top

#1 Not bad. Not quite KCNA, but not bad. The pre-school bus burning, the paid thugs. Nice touches.
Needs more "running amuck", "go reckless", and "sea of fire" type descriptives. Tell him to work on it.

Posted by tu3031 2003-03-26 11:18:08|| 2003-03-26 11:18:08|| Front Page Top

#2 Punch it up a little...

Posted by mojo 2003-03-26 12:24:34|| 2003-03-26 12:24:34|| Front Page Top

#3 They need some more spittle-covered adjectives and adverbs to sell this copy. They must realize that we all are in a global economy now and they must compete with KCNA (numbah wun!!!) and Jihadii boys in cut-throat competition for a piece of the action.

Posted by Alaska Paul 2003-03-26 13:25:29|| 2003-03-26 13:25:29|| Front Page Top

#4 5 grand? I missed that, thought it was 500. Hell for $5,000, Bob will probably beat himself up.

Posted by tu3031 2003-03-26 14:32:08|| 2003-03-26 14:32:08|| Front Page Top

#5 Maybe this will give you more of a feeling for Mugabe's rhetoric; "I am still the Hitler of the time. This Hitler has only one objective, justice for his own people, sovereignty for his people, recognition of the independence of his people, and their right to their resources."

Posted by Pink & Fluffy 2003-03-26 17:07:02|| 2003-03-26 17:07:02|| Front Page Top

#6 *Holds up card* 8

Posted by Ptah 2003-03-26 18:42:10|| 2003-03-26 18:42:10|| Front Page Top

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